I'll put them to work. I think the only thing I'd say is maybe the lettering, copy make it a little bolder somehow. *bold 선명한, 굵은 I think it really pops. *pop : to be very noticeable and bright, especially when seen next to something of a different color ex) Splashes of yellow, blue, pink, and orange pop against a black background. So it kind of leaps off the page, you know? *leap off the page 즉각 시선을 끄는(책장에서 튀어나오는 것) They're just gonna make a couple more tweaks. *tweak (변경)수정하다/ 잡아당기다, 비틀다 Just to make it a little more hip.
*hip 유행에 밝은, 느낌있게
Hold that thought. 잠깐만요. These guys are totally capable of running with that idea.
*run with (생각·방법을) 받아들이다. 이용하기 시작하다
That's street. 취향 저격이네. *reek 지독한 악취를 풍기다 They are talking over one another.
*talk over (합의도출·결정을 위해) (~와) ~에 대해 이야기를 나누다 I talked to you about this before, well apparently none of it sunk in… *sink in 충분히 이해되다, 스며들다
*chase somebody up ~를 재촉하다 That's what a child does. I know it was a setback not to get into school. *setback 좌절, 차질